Looks good VisualFrames, but it also has a bit of a template feel to it. How about throwing in another colour for contrast?
And the search bar is somewhat too rounded for my liking, it loses touch with the rest of the layout, but that’s probably just me.
I agree with the last post. I would begin with a color palate then go from there. Other than that, it’s very clean looking. Clutter seems to be an endemic issue with online stores today. More bells and whistles is no necessarily a good thing. Good luck.
I probably wouldnt have a problem purchasing a template or twofrom you but you dont hve live sites - so I cant navigate around and see how they work… tells me they don’t work to well - build a system I can play with all your templates and youll prob have at least one extra sale (if not many many more)